Stephen B. Pearl
Dark Dragon Publishing, June 2013
Reviewed by Ser
It should be noted before going further that I received a prepublished, uncorrected proof for review. Therefore, it didn’t have the cover art or summaries to hint at what I was getting myself into.
Worlds Apart is a romantic fiction novel about Alcina and Markus, two pagans from similar yet completely different worlds. Both dealing with struggles and opposition in their respective worlds, their paths suddenly intersect when a science experiment-slash-ritual brings Markus hurtling into Alcina’s world.
It took me a little while to get into the story, but once I was in the plot it was enjoyable. There were a plethora of characters but it wasn’t too complicated to keep track of them. The only confusing spot for me was when the author chose to continue the story in Markus’ world after his disappearance, and I had to play catch-up to figure out who these new characters were. I’m glad the author did choose to continue the story in this world though, as it really helped build up the storyline and presented some new characters (including a sex-obsessed vampire).
I especially enjoyed the tension as Markus learned of Alcina’s world, its different cultures and technologies. The times he stumbled brought a realistic and relatable humor. I thought it was cute that he uses The Magic School Bus to learn our world’s science – excellent choice, Markus!
The author also chose to use humor in some of the chapter titles. Generally good, these sometimes spoil the chapter’s content, and titles such as “Why are the Cute Ones Always Nutz?” only took me out of the story wondering why that “z” is there.
The pagan elements were, on a whole, interesting. There were spots I felt could do with more explanation (as I do not have experience or knowledge of certain deities) or just an extra sentence or two to clear up what was going on. There is a lot of Christian-bashing, mostly directed at an overly zealous cult, but also Christian hate in general. I’m pleased that, for the most part, such generalized hate is commented on by other characters and explained that not all Christians (or those practicing other monotheisms) are bad.
Romance novels are not my cup of chai, and had I known that was the genre of this book I would not have picked it up. There are plenty of sex scenes (and mentions of “nether lips”, which amused me rather than entice me). As it is romance, there was also plenty of sexual humor and discussion outside of the sex scenes – I can’t think of a character in the book that didn’t have some discussion, mental or otherwise, about another character’s breasts, legs, or butt. While appropriate for a romance novel, it isn’t realistic. The only character not interested in boffing, an unnamed side character, was told by Alcina that it was her responsibility to “be a woman” and that her desire to not have sex was only a power game. (pg 58) There are also a few spots of sexism, and not just from the cult. Particularly Markus and Alcina’s discussion about how things are “only chauvinistic when it doesn’t exactly work to your benefit”…”Exactly, just ask any woman”. (pg 169)
Some of the descriptions were a bit of a stretch as well; my particular favorites being, “Only the very observant would notice that her small breasts only rose and fell with breath when she spoke,” (pg 53) and “She liked the fact that this stranger had hoped to see her [naked]” (pg 41). While now realizing this is a romance novel, I couldn’t help but ask myself, “Really?” No matter how attractive someone is, I don’t think I’d ever be comfortable, let alone enjoy, being nude around a person who popped out of my ritual circle speaking another language and poking me with magical language-translating earrings (similar to a Babel fish, though I’m still a bit fuzzy on the particulars).
There were a number of typographical and grammatical errors, particularly from Chapter 29 on, but as I read the uncorrected proof I cannot speak to whether these have been revised. There was also a spot of character name confusion, as Markus was referred to as Marlon (pg 10) and I had to reread a few times to see if I had simply missed the addition of this new character. Hopefully, this too was corrected.
After reading this proof, I was ready to give this book a low score. I didn’t enjoy the plethora of sex and genitalia-obsessed characters and felt it detracted from the book. When I looked up the book to see if it had been published, and saw the cover, I realized I had to reconsider my review and base it on the book as it was intended. Looking at the plot, character development and overall writing, I think this would be an enjoyable book for any romance fan.
Three and a half pawprints out of five.
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